Random Thoughts: 55 Fiction

Monday, January 25, 2010

55 Fiction

55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. I must say it is tougher than I thought it would be, nonetheless it was fun.

KILLING THE FEAR WITHIN

She stood there looking at the motionless body of her tormentor. The weapon, a steel rod, still in her hands. A nervous smile was on her face, she was not sadistic, but she refused to live in fear. First two strikes were a miss, the third was on target and the mouse never moved again.

21 comments:

Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com) said...: lol... that was so unexpected... really nice F55... You have a fan here! keep blogging!

Cheers!
Tavish
Latest blog post: Give me some beer... Give me Champagne; January 25, 2010 at 1:03 PM
Shriti said...: LOL nice one! :); January 25, 2010 at 2:08 PM
The Idiot Blogs said...: Cool... I should try this... although I don't think I will get far.. in 55 words...; January 25, 2010 at 2:48 PM
oRange* said...: bLaaah!
lol, good build up!
niceee :); January 25, 2010 at 4:50 PM
Sorcerer said...: lol
Trauma killed the Mouse!

the way you build up the suspense was good!; January 25, 2010 at 6:32 PM
el_idioto said...: ha ha.. nice twist.. in 55 words.. really tough thing... great; January 25, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Chhaya said...: hahahha..
bang on target ;)

btw,You have been tagged again!!

details @ my blog; January 27, 2010 at 3:03 PM
itsyvitsy said...: Ah! Nice one. The twist in the tale is simply hilarious, yet amazing. The apprehensions of the lady are there to see. The triumph over the apprehensions is also brought out nicely. I like it. :-); January 28, 2010 at 5:30 PM
Sh@s said...: Wow! perfect execution.; January 28, 2010 at 8:50 PM
Dr. Tripat Mehta said...: hilarious...lol..wonderful way of expressing ur views

cheers!; January 29, 2010 at 3:24 PM
nil said...: that was simple AWESOME. Simply AWE-SOME!!
really,keep writing man!; January 31, 2010 at 11:35 PM
Karthik Kotresh said...: Hahaha.. lol.. :D
It couldn't have been better. Too good. :); February 1, 2010 at 4:54 PM
Oxymoron said...: @Tanvish
thanx man i am glad you liked it.. :)

@CL
thanks for the comment :)

@Idiot
yeah you should it's real fun...

@Orange
thanks... :); February 1, 2010 at 6:25 PM
Oxymoron said...: @Sorcerer
indeed...:D
thanks for the comment man...

@Rishi
Thnaks...:)

@Chhaya
Thanks....will give it a try...

@Vittal
thanks man....your comment is probably bigger than my post..:D
it's always lovely to hear from you...; February 1, 2010 at 6:29 PM
Oxymoron said...: @Shas
Hey...welcome to my blog...i am glad you liked it....hope you will keep visiting..

@Tripat
welcome to my blog...it's great you liked it....hope you will keep coming..

@nil
hey..thanks...will definitely continue..

@Karthik
Thanks man...i am glad you liked it..; February 1, 2010 at 6:33 PM
Ashley said...: Ha! That I did not see coming! Very well done. :); February 2, 2010 at 1:20 AM
helloWorld said...: good ...a loving one ...the standing lady gave me a brooding presence , but the turn up is really fantastic... :); February 3, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Diwakar Sinha said...: lol! :D
that was a good one..; February 4, 2010 at 12:18 PM
Somdatta said...: good one!!!!; February 5, 2010 at 12:23 AM
Unknown said...: lol, that was funny! i like :)
and nice blog...; February 24, 2010 at 6:28 PM
C G said...: Ah! 55 fictions...Nice. :); March 14, 2010 at 9:59 PM