Monday, January 25, 2010

55 Fiction

 55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words. I must say it is tougher than I thought it would be, nonetheless it was fun.






KILLING THE FEAR WITHIN

She stood there looking at the motionless body of her tormentor. The weapon, a steel rod, still in her hands. A nervous smile was on her face, she was not sadistic, but she refused to live in fear. First two strikes were a miss, the third was on target and the mouse never moved again.



22 comments:

Tavish Chadha said...

lol... that was so unexpected... really nice F55... You have a fan here! keep blogging!

Cheers!
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Chocolate Lover said...

LOL nice one! :)

The Idiot Blogs said...

Cool... I should try this... although I don't think I will get far.. in 55 words...

oRange* said...

bLaaah!
lol, good build up!
niceee :)

Sorcerer said...

lol
Trauma killed the Mouse!

the way you build up the suspense was good!

Rishi said...

ha ha.. nice twist.. in 55 words.. really tough thing... great

Chhaya said...

hahahha..
bang on target ;)

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Vittaldas Prabhu said...

Ah! Nice one. The twist in the tale is simply hilarious, yet amazing. The apprehensions of the lady are there to see. The triumph over the apprehensions is also brought out nicely. I like it. :-)

Shas said...

Wow! perfect execution.

Tripat "Prerna" said...

hilarious...lol..wonderful way of expressing ur views

cheers!

nil said...

that was simple AWESOME. Simply AWE-SOME!!
really,keep writing man!

Karthik said...

Hahaha.. lol.. :D
It couldn't have been better. Too good. :)

Oxymoron said...

@Tanvish
thanx man i am glad you liked it.. :)

@CL
thanks for the comment :)

@Idiot
yeah you should it's real fun...

@Orange
thanks... :)

Oxymoron said...

@Sorcerer
indeed...:D
thanks for the comment man...

@Rishi
Thnaks...:)

@Chhaya
Thanks....will give it a try...

@Vittal
thanks man....your comment is probably bigger than my post..:D
it's always lovely to hear from you...

Oxymoron said...

@Shas
Hey...welcome to my blog...i am glad you liked it....hope you will keep visiting..

@Tripat
welcome to my blog...it's great you liked it....hope you will keep coming..

@nil
hey..thanks...will definitely continue..

@Karthik
Thanks man...i am glad you liked it..

Ashley said...

Ha! That I did not see coming! Very well done. :)

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world of love said...

good ...a loving one ...the standing lady gave me a brooding presence , but the turn up is really fantastic... :)

Diwakar Sinha said...

lol! :D
that was a good one..

Somdatta said...

good one!!!!

Mehak said...

lol, that was funny! i like :)
and nice blog...

C G said...

Ah! 55 fictions...Nice. :)