tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post2392521867891301948..comments2024-03-28T13:45:39.789+05:30Comments on Random Thoughts: Random Story #6Oxymoronhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04218564425878891301noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-62119882348920987532010-03-24T19:29:12.397+05:302010-03-24T19:29:12.397+05:30That was good.. i probably wouldnt have liked it s...That was good.. i probably wouldnt have liked it so much had it ended otherwise.. :)susiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01092483845943249910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-10483419595044341392010-02-24T18:34:30.098+05:302010-02-24T18:34:30.098+05:30intense story!
u have a talent for writing..but y...intense story! <br />u have a talent for writing..but you probably already know that! oh well..i'm glad i stumbled upon this blog, its great :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02851514258259153850noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-60132790689825645372010-02-12T06:58:13.683+05:302010-02-12T06:58:13.683+05:30Shuuu,good night!I wouldn't wanna mess with Am...Shuuu,good night!I wouldn't wanna mess with Amanda.I'd probably be a shark bait to her.Of course I'm a straight woman and would never be her costomer,unless she is bi,but I m not bi either,neither would I buy Amanda if I was bi,it's just that would never wanna mess with her,but I'm not scared of her or am I a tinsy bit like my FORMER girl friend,I'm glad I know she's a sociopath that explains a lot.KittySigurdardottir.https://www.blogger.com/profile/08535880999187346456noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-90086581033872842792010-01-25T14:51:22.142+05:302010-01-25T14:51:22.142+05:30OW... OW... OW... OW
He couldn't stand? He co...OW... OW... OW... OW<br /><br />He couldn't stand? He couldn't stand??<br /><br />Poor man... now wonder he fainted...<br /><br />Jokes apart mate.. well written...The Idiot Blogshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11514194585620709626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-71163139497455879942010-01-25T12:20:51.552+05:302010-01-25T12:20:51.552+05:30@mohit welcome to my blog...i am glad you liked it...@mohit welcome to my blog...i am glad you liked it...<br /><br />@Tavish hey...better late then never...it's good to know it was worth your time...<br /><br />@karthik i guess he was too nervous from the begining...<br /><br />@VK hello.....everybody seems to believe the guy deserved it...while i feel bad for the poor fellow....<br /><br />@Ashley hey....it had been a while since you visited my blog..it's great to know that you found my story engrossing...Oxymoronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218564425878891301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-90864388176934152592010-01-24T14:10:23.975+05:302010-01-24T14:10:23.975+05:30Aha! Did not see that coming..But then again...He ...Aha! Did not see that coming..But then again...He had it coming...<br /><br />Very well told..I read this amongst a lot of chaos around me..But I was still engrossed..Just refusing to leave my screen..You are a very good story teller! :)Ashleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11051126348353987135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-59066437788907570472010-01-23T18:44:01.437+05:302010-01-23T18:44:01.437+05:30Lol.. The fact that the protagonist couldn't d...Lol.. The fact that the protagonist couldn't do it almost made me laugh and yes, he desrves the aftermath. And the portrayal of his fear is really good. <br />Nice one!<br /><br />Do check out the new story I've posted in my blog. <br /><br />Cheers.Vikram Kumarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06802374315781726110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-51417711486812915152010-01-22T20:05:04.086+05:302010-01-22T20:05:04.086+05:30i know for a fact that Caucasian MEN are real hot....i know for a fact that Caucasian MEN are real hot...woman i dont know :P<br /><br />AND...nice one :)<br />like short simple and sweet...!!!!<br /><br />Really :)Shreya.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02773094824681186907noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-61239977207748787372010-01-22T16:52:56.645+05:302010-01-22T16:52:56.645+05:30It was too good, man. I knew your protagonist didn...It was too good, man. I knew your protagonist didn't have the guts to do it, from the beginning. :P<br />The ending was apt. The narration was very good. <br />It was a nice read. :)Karthikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02711684817675364335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-80673314238357069692010-01-22T10:46:54.401+05:302010-01-22T10:46:54.401+05:30man u r awesome... very nicely narrated story... j...man u r awesome... very nicely narrated story... just couldn't get my attention away for even a min...<br /><br />P.S. I know I was supposed to viit the blog muche before and I couldnt... better late than never!<br /><br />Cheers!<br />Tavish - <b><a href="http://www.sensible-bakwas.com/" rel="nofollow">Sensible Bakwas</a></b>Tavish Chadha(sensible-bakwas.com)https://www.blogger.com/profile/17839310637450577558noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-51148975074429842192010-01-21T19:41:38.045+05:302010-01-21T19:41:38.045+05:30naice... a great random post..
I wanted to see wh...naice... a great random post..<br /><br />I wanted to see what happened without all the alcohol though ;)<br /><br />next part coming up?mohithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06258505310542245062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-39946589136926395892010-01-19T22:17:20.757+05:302010-01-19T22:17:20.757+05:30@Rishi thanx dude.....i guess we should all beware...@Rishi thanx dude.....i guess we should all beware of the Amandas of the world.... :)<br /><br />@nil it's great to hear that my story made you think...thats one of the main reasons why i write...<br />oh....i am definitely going to more regular at your blog...Oxymoronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218564425878891301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-82454791132353178242010-01-19T22:09:40.563+05:302010-01-19T22:09:40.563+05:30@vittal i kind of feel sorry for the guy...but som...@vittal i kind of feel sorry for the guy...but some lessons need to be learned the hard way...<br /><br />@sorcerer hey....thanx for the appreciation...<br /><br />@yemiled i am glad you did...<br /><br />@ALH let's hope i do a better job next time...Oxymoronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218564425878891301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-2946507615595505962010-01-19T13:50:32.811+05:302010-01-19T13:50:32.811+05:30Hmmm. Intrigued by your writing..
Liked it,actual...Hmmm. Intrigued by your writing..<br /><br />Liked it,actually! <br />Hmm..still thinking!<br /><br />Anyway, wher are you on my blog!?<br />haven't seen u in a while.<br />updated. waiting for ur feedback!!<br /><br />keep writing dude! Youre good.nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-24502586408162243262010-01-19T08:43:49.694+05:302010-01-19T08:43:49.694+05:30I will never cheat with a 6-f00t tall gal call Ama...I will never cheat with a 6-f00t tall gal call Amanda, again.<br /><br />well written.. scripted beautifullyel_idiotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07951829175676646417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-58262939954858337492010-01-18T23:45:25.364+05:302010-01-18T23:45:25.364+05:30Thanks for the comment on my blog! I really appre...Thanks for the comment on my blog! I really appreciate it. <br /><br />I read your story and agree with Chhaya. I think with some tight editing this could be a very good story :) ALHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05827570801534766425noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-45723249240897570552010-01-18T18:16:34.631+05:302010-01-18T18:16:34.631+05:30Liked the story.
And loved the reply to chhaya.
:...Liked the story. <br />And loved the reply to chhaya.<br />:~)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-34739248929282172602010-01-18T18:05:01.198+05:302010-01-18T18:05:01.198+05:30well written dude. Apart from the spices it has a ...well written dude. Apart from the spices it has a very strong point that your story made.<br />very nice<br /><br />my knowledgeable friend used to saySorcererhttp://www.evilsfury.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-57465291343536311372010-01-18T17:42:24.299+05:302010-01-18T17:42:24.299+05:30I love this story. You have brought out a very str...I love this story. You have brought out a very strong message - "apparently a man is not what he fascinates about, he is what he can do". So very true. And I could only say that it was fair for him to lose his belongings as he would constantly be reminded of this message next time he thinks macho of himself.itsyvitsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163127814904396350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-32610962258296232932010-01-18T11:14:59.518+05:302010-01-18T11:14:59.518+05:30@chhaya
oh...i am still a toddler when it comes t...@chhaya<br /><br />oh...i am still a toddler when it comes to writing....it will still take a while before i develop an unhealthy ego about it....till then you are safe...and if you look closely you will find it's no longer unsolicited.... :)<br /><br />coming to the story when i began writing it...he was actually going to go through with it.....but somewhere during the writing i started liking the guy...so the whole explanation was more for me...then for the readers...<br /><br />ofcourse even i like reading stuff that make me think instead of spoon feeding me everything....a big reason why i dont like mainstream bollywood <br />movies... ;)<br /><br />@sunil<br />hey... welcome to my blog...indeed every tough situation we face in our life is a test of our character...<br />hope to see you more here..Oxymoronhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04218564425878891301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-88065485761641095772010-01-18T10:30:06.080+05:302010-01-18T10:30:06.080+05:30Goodness may torment..... and truly there are many...Goodness may torment..... and truly there are many times when hunger and passion wage a war against logic and reason.....who wins the battle is decided by what we call character....nice read....Sunil Balanihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14806041150956325741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-33285627344979912472010-01-18T09:29:28.572+05:302010-01-18T09:29:28.572+05:30Ahhhh damn...
Poor guy :)
btw, if u dont mind, ...Ahhhh damn... <br /><br />Poor guy :)<br /><br />btw, if u dont mind, i wud suggest that you remove the explanation about why he cudnt <i> do it </i>..<br /><br />as a reader, i wud love to read between the lines and understand what you explained.<br /><br />overall, nice.<br /><br />PS: i really hope u wont mind my unsolicited suggestion :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.com