tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post1318698689100166927..comments2024-03-28T13:45:39.789+05:30Comments on Random Thoughts: Random Story #5Oxymoronhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04218564425878891301noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-53371651882190001662010-01-16T14:19:08.130+05:302010-01-16T14:19:08.130+05:30felo-de-se..all the aggression we hold within. im ...felo-de-se..all the aggression we hold within. im sure we all have lived, in some part or the other, the life of your protagonist. ironically, the end isnt even fortunate, what a blasted luck, to carry the burden of breath when he wished death.Tongue Triphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17357978662867516949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-87774319807829991002010-01-12T18:36:18.735+05:302010-01-12T18:36:18.735+05:30Very well narrated. The thoughts of the protagonis...Very well narrated. The thoughts of the protagonist have been wonderfully expressed. Life does that sometimes, doesn't it? If only people think for a moment before taking that last leap!<br />Liked the ending, by the way. At least he didn't die. Failed suicide attempts work beautifully sometimes. Eg: Sidney Sheldon. He tried to commit suicide at the age of 17. If he'd succeeded in it, the world would've missed something precious. <br />Enjoyed reading. Keep writing. :-)Karthikhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02711684817675364335noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-50882098446659540422010-01-11T20:11:57.482+05:302010-01-11T20:11:57.482+05:30Agree with Chhaya's comments. Seems like nothi...Agree with Chhaya's comments. Seems like nothing works for him. He thought nothing worked but his death would, but that didn't happen either.<br /><br />I liked the tragedy portrayed in this story.itsyvitsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11163127814904396350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-78016606039513499592010-01-11T19:16:10.218+05:302010-01-11T19:16:10.218+05:30hats off to your writings!!! plz get a book publis...hats off to your writings!!! plz get a book published...i will be the first one to buy it..Somdattahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13682986862116502654noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-350261711670156342010-01-11T14:50:28.056+05:302010-01-11T14:50:28.056+05:30Isn't it the confusion in attempting death? At...Isn't it the confusion in attempting death? At least readers like me like to see an effect of a mental turbulence inside. But then the failed attempt may make matters worse!! <br /><br />An interesting read, I must admit!IdleMindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05944544667725227373noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-69527054856157025012010-01-11T14:32:32.213+05:302010-01-11T14:32:32.213+05:30Awesome. Well written!! Excellent!
You just got bl...Awesome. Well written!! Excellent!<br />You just got blog rolled by me :)<br />Go see!<br />Keep writing....nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-35835998320942157482010-01-11T12:30:51.743+05:302010-01-11T12:30:51.743+05:30there is nothing more humiliating that a failed su...there is nothing more humiliating that a failed suicide attempt.<br /><br />first - u try commiting suicide btw u fail at ur life...<br /><br />second - u fail at commiting suicide too..<br /><br />its like death rejecting you right after life kicks u<br /><br />beautifully written :)Chhayahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02793691982402313454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-31146112837946670262010-01-10T17:32:40.532+05:302010-01-10T17:32:40.532+05:30*claps..*claps
fantastic ..wonderfully written.
I...*claps..*claps<br />fantastic ..wonderfully written.<br /><br />I think he made his life a bit more closer to heaven..i mean..Hell!!Sorcererhttp://www.evilsfury.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-24496542730834482262010-01-10T15:31:46.317+05:302010-01-10T15:31:46.317+05:30Ohh awesome fantastic. But i can see myself in dat...Ohh awesome fantastic. But i can see myself in dat boy and urself in d boy who marries galfrnds of other i knw u will do it with me in future...Manjayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05434555518433817696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-31599418586135856242010-01-10T12:55:33.189+05:302010-01-10T12:55:33.189+05:30aah, seriously. a failed suicide attempt is as goo...aah, seriously. a failed suicide attempt is as good as hell.<br /><br />nicely written!oRange*https://www.blogger.com/profile/03239294667530000687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-1644812510173939992010-01-10T12:04:16.102+05:302010-01-10T12:04:16.102+05:30Awesome!
loved it! :))Awesome!<br />loved it! :))Shritihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10470363841491220275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4198298688390837004.post-51145966941915517272010-01-10T09:42:23.192+05:302010-01-10T09:42:23.192+05:30Well written. I like gloomy stories so very much. ...Well written. I like gloomy stories so very much. All your stories end a line before they should,don't they?<br />:~P But that's what makes it even more interesting!!<br />Write moreeee!!<br /><br />Take care.<br />Bye.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com